just 4 fun....μερικες εκθεσουλες....

[nick#18]

χαχα....λοιπον εχω μια εκθεση ενος συμμαθητη μου στα αγγλικα (ταξη lower) και φυσικα ειναι διορθομενη απο καθηγητη:

 

Τιτλος: The Best Holiday Writer: John Ag.

>My last summer was exellent, marvelous, apselutly fabulus.But...just for me.

As usual, every day I was with my friend, papathemelis.Especialy one day we talked about out future,
both of us want to work in al-caida with bin laden.After the convertation we decided that we must
go holidays.But...where? I told him to go in CU Land.

So we invited out friends: pikachu, bin landen, obarak obama and loua loua. Kokalis gave a ship
to loua loua for a present so we had the transport. Next morning we had an early start.
Pikachu take with him 2 poke-balls, bin lander took one kalasnikof and three bombs, loua loua
took 2 balls and obarak obama 5 mobile phones.

When we arrived to CU Land, we get off the boat. There, all day obarak obama talk to his phone without
payment, because he sell his life to dialogo, bin landen was tried to kill obarak obama because he is an
american, pikachu throw thunders to papathemelis and loua loua did tricks and puted goal with his ball.
I was explore the island and i saw mogli, gozila and snorlax who was eating many trees.

After all these next morning we get back to athens and we all die...

End.

ναι θα σας φανει παραξενο που δεν την 0νισε ο καθηγιτης αλλα τεσπα..τον εβαλε να γραψει αλλη σωστη...μετα απο αυτο συμφονισαμε να περνει τις διορθομενες τις κανονικες και να τις αλαζει και τελος να μου τις δινει και να τις κανω οτι θελω....

 

εχω κιαλη σε λιγο....χεχε

 

για γραψτε και εσεις τιποτα μαγικο :p:p:p

[Lilith19]

Αρχισε η πεμπτη δημοτικου,ε?

[EXARXEIA_CITY]

talk to his phone without

payment, because he sell his life to dialogo

 

χαχαχαχαχαχαχα καλο !

[nick#18]

περιμενεται σε λιγο ερχετε η επομενη δεν ξερω αν ειναι διορθομενη η οχι...οπως ειναι γραμμενη την γραφω...

[antonl]

Δεν είναι διορθωμένη

[nick#18]

να τη!!!

 

Title: Jurney to the center of the Earth Writer: John AG.

 

>Yesterday i was with my friend Macain who was crying 
because the new president of U.S.A was Obama.
I was eating ROMMA PIZZA but Macain didn't eat because 
he was Milan . Because i wanted to cheer him up i
told him to go on a trip and finally he told me yes.
So we invite and our friends, Paris hilton who was 
playing PES 2009, Kaka who did kaka in a toilet, 
Saki Rouva who was in X-Factor and Scoco who was 
sleeping in the match Aek-Pao
Next morning we started. Paris took with her PSP, Kaka
take his friend Ronaldo, Rouvas took his baby and Scoco
didn't took nothing because he didn;t woke up
We call James Bont to do a hole in a volcano, 
so he put a bomb and a big hole opened. But with the
woke up Mummy3 from Egypt. Mymmy tryed to find us,
so he followed us. In his road he ate Madonna,
Niko Evagelato from apodiksis and Anita Pania with 
vas vas the paraskevas, Kung Fu Panda took 11880 to ask
what was happening but Mummy became angry and he ate 
Panda. Sirus who singing Qele Qele so Lordi came and 
because they are very hourd try to kill the Mummy.
Finnaly Aladin's Jini killed the Mummy. We were in 
the center of the Earth, because we haven't nothing 
to eat. We killed Paris and we eat her. Then Kaka
play football with ronaldo. Mcain called Lola 
and told her "Allo Lola". Sakis throw his baby in 
the fire because he was crying.
The next day we turned back to Amerika There 
Scoco woke up and then we all....die 

END

 

 

-----Προστέθηκε 6/11/2008 στις 06 : 41 : 31-----

 

 

Δεν είναι διορθωμένη

εμενα μου ειπε οτι ηταν διορθομενη δε την πολυπροσεξα...τεσπα

[becausE]

Αυτά τώρα είναι αγγλικά επιπέδου lower μη χέσω; θα σκίσω κάνα πτυχίο

[nick#18]

ναι το ξερω πως δεν ειναι....του τα εχουν πει πολλεεεεεες φορες αλλα μπα....εκει αυτος

[gnsX]

Αυτά τώρα είναι αγγλικά επιπέδου lower μη χέσω; θα σκίσω κάνα πτυχίο

 

Το πρόσεξες κι εσύ ε;Είναι Scocco με δύο C,άκου lower και να κάνει λάθος στον Scocco

[parsifal]

Τί ηλικία έχει ο συμμαθητής σου;

[Tenshi]

να τη!!!

 

Title: Jurney to the center of the Earth Writer: John AG.

 

>Yesterday i was with my friend Macain who was crying 
because the new president of U.S.A was Obama.
I was eating ROMMA PIZZA but Macain didn't eat because 
he was Milan . Because i wanted to cheer him up i
told him to go on a trip and finally he told me yes.
So we invite and our friends, Paris hilton who was 
playing PES 2009, Kaka who did kaka in a toilet, 
Saki Rouva who was in X-Factor and Scoco who was 
sleeping in the match Aek-Pao
Next morning we started. Paris took with her PSP, Kaka
take his friend Ronaldo, Rouvas took his baby and Scoco
didn't took nothing because he didn;t woke up
We call James Bont to do a hole in a volcano, 
so he put a bomb and a big hole opened. But with the
woke up Mummy3 from Egypt. Mymmy tryed to find us,
so he followed us. In his road he ate Madonna,
Niko Evagelato from apodiksis and Anita Pania with 
vas vas the paraskevas, Kung Fu Panda took 11880 to ask
what was happening but Mummy became angry and he ate 
Panda. Sirus who singing Qele Qele so Lordi came and 
because they are very hourd try to kill the Mummy.
Finnaly Aladin's Jini killed the Mummy. We were in 
the center of the Earth, because we haven't nothing 
to eat. We killed Paris and we eat her. Then Kaka
play football with ronaldo. Mcain called Lola 
and told her "Allo Lola". Sakis throw his baby in 
the fire because he was crying.
The next day we turned back to Amerika There 
Scoco woke up and then we all....die 

END

 

 

-----Προστέθηκε 6/11/2008 στις 06 : 41 : 31-----

 

Απο την πόρτα σου περνώ και τηγανίζεις ψάρια,μου πετάς ένα κεφτέ...ευχαριστώ δέν καπνίζω

[nick#18]

Τί ηλικία έχει ο συμμαθητής σου;

14 αλλα.....αλλα

[parsifal]

14;

 

Χμμμ, και στα ελληνικά έτσι είναι οι εκθέσεις του άραγε; Το βρίσκω αρκετά πιθανό. Και θλιβερό, αν είναι όντως έτσι...

[livewire]

Protip: Καλά σας trollare ο τόπικ-στάρτερ...(Thus spake Toufas)

[akpe]

για γραψτε και εσεις τιποτα μαγικο :p:p:p

 

ooook.

 

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